Polish my speech

For this assignment I need my speech to be re-edited and polished before I record the speech. The introduction has all the major requirements (hook, link, reasons to listen, and thesis). The main points were excellent, but they need to be better supported. I need to have at least 2 sources in the speech for this week, Conclusion is fine.

The speech must be at least three minutes long. Submit the transcript of your speech as well. This must be 500 words minimum. The transcript of your speech should look very similar to the Week 2 assignment. The transcript should contain the same information but be a more polished version of the paper you submitted in Week 2. Just like your speech has evolved and progressed, the paper you submit will reflect those changes.