This essay for scholarship, I have written two stories but I feel like it is not smooth so if you can make it sound better.

I have written story 1 and story 2, but I feel like story 2 sounds more like for English language yet story one it is more like business since I mentioned the business plan I took in high school, yet just if you can make it sound more smooth from taking from both of the story or just to get an idea of who I am and write something better.