Rough Draft

Assignment 6: Rough Draft

The library guide for this class  (https://nu.libguides.com/ENG240) contains readings in every undergraduate major that requires this class. Read the articles in the tab that corresponds to your major area of study. If you don’t know what your major will be or if you are pursuing general studies, you may choose any subject that interests you.

1. Compose a 5- or 6-page double-spaced research paper written in response to one or more of the class readings. This paper will focus on an argument. This means it will make an arguable claim on a debatable subject or (possibly) propose and answer a research question in your field. All the assignments in this class have helped you prepare for the final assignment, so you should have much of the work completed already. Now it is time to assemble it all into a coherent whole. 

One body paragraph i had to submit

Why Schools Should Teach Social Emotional Learning Inside Classrooms?

1.                        There are many benefits to why social emotional learning should be taught in classrooms by student’s teachers. For starters, social emotional learning can improve student’s academics. Social emotional learning (SEL) has been proven to better children’s behaviors. If a child is constantly acting act, then they are not learning. If a child is not learning, it also means they are not meeting their academic requirements to succeed. Social emotional learning can better a child’s interpersonal skills. The way a child communicate with their peers and their teachers are very important because a positive relationship with their peers and classmates matters. Having a relationship with their peers and teachers will ensure the students likeliness to want to come to school each day. Social and emotional learning also influence the child’s emotional well-being. Being able to control their emotions and express their emotions in a healthy way. It is important when a child understands having a feeling, good or bad is normal. However, it is the way you respond to your feelings is what really matters. One of the goals that social emotional learning teach is for students to express themselves in a healthier way.

The professor feedback from the annotated bibliography

1. Good start, Fatima. I think the big note is that you’re likely to need more than three body paragraphs to support a full 5-6 page final paper, so you’ll want to explore ways to flesh out this piece.I think being more direct in taking a stand on your thesis statement could help. As I read here, I wondered a bit how the connections would be made between the paragraphs, so thinking through how each of these paragraphs connect to your argument will be important.
2. We already have the intro/conclusion plus one body paragraph. Let’s revise the body paragraph I wrote posted above and extend it to meet the full requirements.