Rationale essay to graudate

I already wrote the rationale essay, there are just side edits my mentor put in that just need to be edited and some things added. You can find out all about my degree, it is a bachelors of science in business management and economics SUNY Empire State College is what it will be based off of. like i said the entire essay is done there are just edits that I dont have time to do that the mentor said need to be done so the board approves me for graudation. i will attatch the essay any questions or clarifications ask!