Please assist me with this English assignment

Wynn Fields is applying to work in the MacEwan Bookstore part time while
finishing a Management Studies program. Because you are a friend, Wynn asks
you to provide her with suggestions on how she could strengthen her résumé
before applying.
Instructions
Write Wynn an e-mail of approximately 200 words recommending six specific
things she could do to improve her résumé. Avoid vague statements that she
might not understand and give her some examples. Do you think her résumé
makes her stand out as a candidate? Does she provide enough detail about
her abilities?
To post your critique, select Journals located on the course navigation menu
and choose: Module 7: Critique 5 (Graded). Please proofread your critique
before posting it to ensure your grammar, punctuation, and spelling are correct.