Medical School Admission Application

I am going to upload a couple of admission applications. If I have already answered the question, I need you to fix the grammar, rewrite some sentences in an academic manner, and add more sentences to fulfill the maximum allowed characters or words. If there’s no answer, you can answer it with fulfilling the requirements.

Also, I am going to upload my personal statement as a reference for the ideas, because the answers cannot contradict with my story.