Letter of recommendation

My friend needs a letter of recommendation to get into a program for her Bachelor of Science. 

She would like to add these main points:

I would also add my work ethic, determination to find answers and resources to assist, my kind and caring nature to always be generous and give back to my community. I serve in support of my local church participating in harm reduction and peer support groups. I would be an asset to the psychology degree program because I have a desire to help others find their way and heal from the traumas of the world

I’ve volunteered working with children at preschool level, I’ve worked with special education students for several years at the high school level. I’ve done peer support and led mental health advocate groups. Personal information of how I may have supported you in a way that would suggest I’m good at support peers through difficult times.