Improve quality of resume

I would like to iprove quality of resume.

I had my resume reviewed and this is what their feedback was:

-Needs more information to showcase my professional value

-avoid I, me, or my

-Im missing a standard section . Personal brand, what is unique about me, etc. It was recommended I display more solid accomplishments. They said I have a duty based resume and that it won’t set me apart from my competition. They recommended accomplishments to describe how well I did it.