Fix and Improve my Final Paper

I have already finished my final paper about Internet Economy, but I still need to improve and make my paper better. So I need help.

I have writing rubric and a sample paper. Please according to writing rubric and the sample paper professor posted, to fix and edit my paper.

Please highlight the places that you fixed. Thus, I can see the changes directly. Thanks! I will upload my paper, rubric and sample paper when someone picks up this assignment.