Finalizing my already done essay comparing two authors who wrote about graphic novels

I already completed the rough draft on this rhetorical analysis. I had to compare two authors who wrote articles commenting about graphic novels and their thoughts on their significance. I will submit my rough draft that I already completed. I need to improve on my “topic sentences”. Topic sentences in each body paragraph are important because the most important word needs to bolded in black. I will submit the sample essays she provided us to view as well as the two articles I’m comparing as well as my rough draft.

My teacher let me know I need to work on my topic sentences in each. body paragraph because they are not clear enough on what each paragraph is about. I also need to add quotations in my essay and did not add any.