English grammar quiz
Question Description
I need help with some English grammar questions. Please read the instructions carefully. In order to do it you need to know Adjective, adverb clauses and reduced adjective, asverb clauses and writing with sentence variety (simple, compound and complex sentences), verb tenses, modals and parallel structure.
In 2017, Hurricane Maria ____________ extensive damage to Puerto Rico.
Question 2 (1 point)
Currently, environmental groups _____________ to protect the Everglades.
Question 3 (1 point)
Last year it snowed in southern Georgia. However, so far this winter it __________.
Question 4 (1 point)
American investors are happy because the U.S. dollar _____________ in value over the last few months.
Question 5 (1 point)
Last year, the unemployment rate _________ by two percent.
Question 6 (1 point)
The earth __________ on the sun for its heat and light.
Question 7 (1 point)
The earthquake occurred at 3 a.m. in the morning this past Tuesday. Most people ___________ at that time and didn’t realize what had happened.
Question 8 (1 point)
Over the past 20 years, the number of genetically modified crops ____________ significantly.
Question 9 (1 point)
Question 10 (1 point)
Modals
Question 11 (1 point)
Choose the best answer.
The construction crew might _________ the bridge in time for the holiday traffic.
Question 12 (1 point)
Choose the best answer.
The entire team must _________ together in order to win the game.
Question 13 (1 point)
Choose the best answer.
Soldiers __________ disobey a superior officer.
Question 14 (1 point)
Choose the best answer.
To get the best grade possible, students __________ edit their papers carefully before submitting to their instructor.
Question 15 (1 point)
Rewrite the following sentence using a modal to hedge.
Using cell phones for several hours a day causes cancer.
Question 16 (1 point)
Rewrite the following sentence using a modal to hedge.
Genetically modified organisms endanger wildlife.
Parallel Structure
Question 17 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to complete the sentence.
Men and women working together can reduce inequality slowly, carefully, and _____________.
Question 18 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to complete the sentence.
Unlike the past, these days women are often encouraged to go to college, have careers, and __________.
Question 19 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to complete the sentence.
Both men and women enjoy going to work, making money, and ______________.
Question 20 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to complete the sentence.
Unlike women, men are much more likely to ask for raises, bonuses, and ____________.
Question 21 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to complete the sentence.
Men can be more aware of their behavior, honest in their interactions, and _____________.
Question 22 (2 points)
Answer this question using parallel structure. Use your own ideas to write a complete sentence. Write only ONE sentence.
What are three activities that people typically like to do on vacation?
Adjective Clauses
Adjective Clauses
Question 23 (1 point)
Garth Stein, ________ lives on the west coast, wrote the novel The Art of Racing in the Rain.
Question 24 (1 point)
Pinellas County, _____________ has a population over 900,000, is a popular tourist destination.
Question 25 (1 point)
The police arrested the man _________ the witness identified.
Question 26 (1 point)
Nocturnal animals, _____________ are active at nighttime, usually sleep during the day.
Question 27 (1 point)
Combine the following two sentences to create a complex sentence that contains an adjective clause.
1. Eggs are the main ingredient in quiche.
2. Quiche is a French specialty.
Question 28 (1 point)
Combine the following two sentences to create a complex sentence that contains an adjective clause.
1. Alligators eat fish, snakes, and turtles.
2. Alligators are classified as reptiles.
Adverb Clauses
Question 29 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
Prices rose sharply _________ export taxes increased.
Question 30 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
For most students, an AA degree usually takes two or three years to complete ____________ a BA takes four or fives years.
Question 31 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
When the instructor ___________ the exam, she will be pleased with the students’ scores.
Question 32 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
__________ it did not rain, the crops continued to grow and thrive.
Question 33 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
When the air conditioning stopped _____________ office workers went home.
Question 34 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
The employees _________________ the manager calls a meeting.
Question 35 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
Although college can be ______________ a degree can be very rewarding.
Question 36 (1 point)
Choose the best answer to fill in the blank.
______________ he was an actor on T.V.
Writing with Sentence Variety
Question 37 (1 point)
Choose the best answer.
Genetically modified foods may not be safe for the environment, _______ several GM crops have been approved in the U.S.
Question 38 (1 point)
Choose the best answer.
The U.S. government declared bald eagles an endangered species, _______ bald eagles were almost extinct in the 1960s.
Question 39 (1 point)
Choose the best answer.
Food is often packaged in plastic which is harmful to the environment, _______ are things we can do as consumers to stop this practice.
Question 40 (2 points)
Combine the following sentences to create a compound sentence. Use an appropriate coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS). Punctuation counts of course!
Greenhouse gases trap heat in the air.
The Earth is getting warmer.
Question 41 (2 points)
Combine the following sentences to create a compound sentence. Use an appropriate coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS). Do not use “AND” for this question. Punctuation counts of course!
The instructor didn’t give any homework during the break.
The students were happy.
Question 42 (2 points)
Combine the following sentences to create a compound sentence. Use an appropriate coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS). Punctuation counts of course! Do not use “AND” for this question.
Iceland has huge frozen glaciers.
It also has more than 100 volcanoes.
Question 43 (2 points)
Combine the following sentences into one complex sentence (one independent clause and one dependent clause). Make sure you punctuate correctly.
It was raining. The game was cancelled.
Question 44 (2 points)
Combine the following sentences to form one complex sentence (on
Please write a Summary
Question Description
How We Missed the Mark
How we have arrived at the present state of affairs can be understood only by studying the forces effective in the development of Negro education since it was systematically undertaken immediately after Emancipation. To point out merely the defects as they appear today will be of little benefit to the present and future generations. These things must be viewed in their historic setting. The conditions of today have been determined by what has taken place in the past, and in a careful study of this history we may see more clearly the great theatre of events in which the Negro has played a part. We may understand better what his role has been and how well he has functioned in it.
The idea of educating the Negroes after the Civil War was largely a prompting of philanthropy. Their white neighbors failed to assume this responsibility. These Black people had been liberated as a result of a sectional conflict out of which their former owners had emerged as victims. From this class, then, the freedmen could not expect much sympathy or cooperation in the effort to prepare themselves to figure as citizens of a modern republic.
From functionaries of the United States government itself and from those who participated in the conquest of the secessionists early came the plan of teaching these freedmen the simple duties of life as worked out by the Freedmen’s Bureau and philanthropic agencies. When systematized this effort became a program for the organization of churches and schools and the direction of them along lines which had been considered most conducive to the progress of people otherwise circumstanced. Here and there some variation was made in this program in view of the fact that the status of the freedmen in no way paralleled that of their friends and teachers, but such thought was not general. When the Negroes in some way would learn to perform the duties which other elements of the population had prepared themselves to discharge they would be duly qualified, it was believed, to function as citizens of the country.
Inasmuch as most Negroes lived in the agricultural South, moreover, and only a few of them at first acquired small farms there was little in their life which any one of thought could not have easily understood. The poverty which afflicted them for a generation after Emancipation held them down to the lowest order of society, nominally free but economically enslaved. The participation of the freedmen in government for a few years during the period known as the Reconstruction had little bearing on their situation except that they did join with the uneducated poor whites in bringing about certain much-desired social reforms, especially in giving the South its first plan of democratic education in providing for a school system at public expense. Neither this inadequately supported school system nor the struggling higher institutions of a classical order established about the same time, however, connected the Negroes very closely with life as it was. These institutions were concerned rather with life as they hoped to make it. When the Negro found himself deprived of influence in politics, therefore, and at the same time unprepared to participate in the higher functions in the industrial development which this country began to undergo, it soon became evident to him that he was losing ground in the basic things of life. He was spending his time studying about the things which had been or might be, but he was learning little to help him to do better the tasks at hand. Since the Negroes believed that the causes of this untoward condition lay without the race, migration was attempted, and emigration to Africa was again urged. At this psychological moment came the wave of industrial education which swept the country by storm. The educational authorities in the cities and States throughout the Black Belt began to change the course of study to make the training of the Negro conform to this policy.
The missionary teachers from the North in defense of their idea of more liberal training, however, fearlessly attacked this new educational policy; and the Negroes participating in the same dispute arrayed themselves respectively on one side or the other. For a generation thereafter the quarrel as to whether the Negro should be given a classical or a practical education was the dominant topic in Negro schools and churches throughout the United States. Labor was the most important thing of life, it was argued; practical education counted in reaching that end; and the Negro worker must be taught to solve this problem of efficiency before directing attention to other things.
Others more narrow-minded than the advocates of industrial education, seized upon the idea, feeling that, although the Negro must have some semblance of education, it would be a fine stroke to be able to make a distinction between the training given the Negro and that provided for the whites. Inasmuch as the industrial educational idea rapidly gained ground, too, many Negroes for political purposes began to espouse it; and schools and colleges hoping thereby to obtain money worked out accordingly makeshift provisions for such instruction, although they could not satisfactorily offer it. A few real industrial schools actually equipped themselves for this work and turned out a number of graduates with such preparation.
Unfortunately, however, the affair developed into a sort of battle of words, for in spite of all they said and did the majority of the Negroes, those who did make some effort to obtain an education, did not actually receive either the industrial or the classical education. Negroes attended industrial schools, took such training as was prescribed, and received their diplomas; but few of them developed adequate efficiency to be able to do what they were supposedly trained to do. The schools in which they were educated could not provide for all the experience with machinery which white apprentices trained in factories had. Such industrial education as these Negroes received, then, was merely to master a technique already discarded in progressive centers; and even in less complicated operations of industry these schools had no such facilities as to parallel the numerous processes of factories conducted on the plan of the division of labor. Except what value such training might have in the development of the mind by making practical applications of mathematics and science, then, it was a failure.
The majority of Negro graduates of industrial schools, therefore, have gone into other avenues, and too often into those for which they have had no preparation whatever. Some few who actually prepared for the industrial sphere by self-improvement likewise sought other occupations for the reason that Negroes were generally barred from higher pursuits by trades unions; and, being unable to develop captains of industry to increase the demand for persons in these lines, the Negroes have not opened up many such opportunities for themselves.
During these years, too, the schools for the classical education for Negroes have not done any better. They have proceeded on the basis that every ambitious person needs a liberal education when as a matter of fact this does not necessarily follow. The Negro trained in the advanced phases of literature, philosophy, and politics has been unable to develop far in using his knowledge because of having to function in the lower spheres of the social order. Advanced knowledge of science, mathematics and languages, moreover, has not been much more useful except for mental discipline because of the dearth of opportunity to apply such knowledge among people who were largely common laborers in towns or peons on the plantations. The extent to which such higher education has been successful in leading the Negro to think, which above all is the chief purpose of education, has merely made him more of a malcontent when he can sense the drift of things and appreciate the impossibility of success in visioning conditions as they really are.
It is very clear, therefore, that we do not have in the life of the Negro today a large number of persons who have been benefited by either of the systems about which we have quarreled so long. The numbers of Negro mechanics and artisans have comparatively declined during the last two generations. The Negroes do not proportionately represent as many skilled laborers as they did before the Civil War. If the practical education which the Negroes received helped to improve the situation so that it is today no worse than what it is, certainly it did not solve the problem as was expected of it.
On the other hand, in spite of much classical education of the Negroes we do not find in the race a large supply of thinkers and philosophers. One excuse is that scholarship among Negroes has been vitiated by the necessity for all of them to combat segregation and fight to retain standing ground in the struggle of the races. Comparatively few American Negroes have produced creditable literature, and still fewer have made any large contribution to philosophy or science. They have not risen to the heights of Black men farther removed from the influences of slavery and segregation. For this reason we do not find among American Negroes a Pushkin, a Gomez, a Geoffrey, a Captein or a Dumas. Even men like Roland Hayes and Henry O. Tanner have risen to the higher levels by getting out of this country to relieve themselves of our stifling traditions and to recover from their education.
English Exam
Question Description
Publishing a novel through a publishing company is an example of:
self-publishing
traditional publishing
Publishing a poem in a literary journal is an example of:
self-publishing
traditional publishing
In creative writing, a bio is:
where the author’s name is listed
brief biography about the author
person who decides what to publish and who edits writing
document submitted for publication
In creative writing, a byline is:
where the author’s name is listed
brief biography about the author
person who decides what to publish and who edits writing
document submitted for publication
The publisher’s job is:
to edit a writer’s work
to print and sell a writer’s work
to copyedit a piece of writing
to proofread a piece of writing
What is copyright?
the right to use another’s work without permission
use of another’s work without permission
the right of ownership over writing, music, or art
none of the above
Which step is not included in the student publishing process?revising the piece
publishing your piece
submitting to a literary journal
submitting to a class anthology
Copyright infringement means:
cutting fringes on the edge of your story
plagiarism
breaking copyright laws
following copyright laws
If you use a few lines from a published song in the story you put into the class anthology and add a note at the end giving credit to the songwriter, this would be considered:
copyright infringement
plagiarism
neither of the above
both of the above
Asking your best friend to write a poem for you and then turning it in to your teacher is:
copyright infringement
plagiarism
both of the above
In writing creative nonfiction, generative writing and drafting are similar in which way?
generative writing and drafting both involve developing new ideas
generative writing and drafting both involve careful revision
neither generative writing nor drafting involve developing new ideas
neither generative writing nor drafting are key parts of the writing process
In creative nonfiction, to make quotes sound like dialogue, writers:
change the words
put the quotes in context
do nothing at all
add imaginary characters
In Merwin’s essay Unchopping A Tree, the clear and specific details of the tree are examples of:
plot
imagery
metaphor
simile
In creative nonfiction, a quote is differentiated from fictional dialogue in that it:
takes the liberty of re-creating someone’s spoken or written words
is closer to the truth than fiction dialogue
can be edited to change the piece’s emotional impact
copies someone’s actually-spoken or written words
In Merwin’s essay Unchopping A Tree, the idea that it is more difficult, and often impossible, to fix something than to break it is an example of the essay’s:
plot
style
theme
tone
The point of view in Merwin’s essay Unchopping A Tree can be described as:
second person
first person
third person
fourth person
The house sat sadly in its emptiness is an example of:
hyperbole
personification
imagery
simile
The huge boulder stood stubbornly in our way is an example of:
metaphor
personification
imagery
simile
That mountain hike ruined my legs! is an example of:
hyperbole
personification
imagery
simile
When writing a creative nonfiction essay draft, be sure to:
keep the information in the essay factual
bring the content alive with fictional sections
avoid using figurative language
none of the above
Which of the following is true of self review?
self-review is unimportant in a creative nonfiction writing process
self-review is completed after peer review in a creative nonfiction writing process
in creative writing, which is factual, self-review is the first step in the writing process
self-review for creative writing plays the same part of the writing process as in other types of writing
The tone of Kim Dana Kupperman’s I Just Lately Started Buying Wings can be described as:
warm but distant
warm and spiritual
warm and passionate
warm but proud
Read this passage from Murmurs: “Lest you think these sounds are music only for astronomers’ ears, consider: The same wrinkles in space that created the gravity wells that gave it rise to the sound also blew up to form clusters, galaxies, stars, planets, us.” What does this passage most contribute to?
theme
plot
tone
point of view
Think about By Any Other Name by Santha Rama Rau. What is its theme?
it doesn’t matter what your name i
some names are better than others
personal and cultural identities are important
personal and cultural identities should be flexible
The tone of K.C. Cole’s essay Murmurs can be described as:
contemptuous
enthusiastic
drastic
irrational
The tone of By Any Other Name can be described as:
humorous
serious
exaggerated
passionless
Most creative nonfiction uses which types of point of view?
first and second
second and third
first and third
none of the above
Which would be the best setting for a science piece on algae?
a city park
a local pond
a bathtub
a kitchen sink
You are writing a creative nonfiction piece about science; your friend is writing a personal essay.
What should both pieces’ introductions have in common?
metaphors
strong showing
quoted facts
the piece’s theme
The best point of view for a memoir on being a youngest child would be:
second person
first person
third person
none of the above
Which of these is not a purpose of foreshadowing:
to create suspense
to add sensory details
to add believability
to create curiosity
In fiction writing, irony is:
a type of sarcasm
the same as satire
often written in to trick the reader
sometimes used with an unreliable narrator
While reading a short story, readers know that Jesse is cheating on Sara, but Sara doesn’t know. What kind of irony is this?
situational irony
dramatic irony
sarcastic irony
verbal irony
Flashback would be best used in a short story that:
is told in second person point of view
shows details of characters’ past and present lives
uses irony as a main plot tool
is set in the deep south
In The Story of an Hour, the flashback letting us know of Mrs. Mallory’s heart condition was used to:
create suspense
develop character
make her later death believable
create a flashback
In a story written in the past tense, the best way to use verb tense in a flashback is to:
use the past perfect tense two or three times and then go into simple past
use past perfect tense throughout the flashback
use simple past tense throughout
not worry about tense at all
An unreliable narrator can be used to:
affect tone
strengthen theme
involve readers as they decide what is true
all of the above
Using a flashback right at the beginning of a story:
is an effective use of a flashback
should never be done since short stories should never have flashbacks
is usually not an effective use of flashbacks
none of the above
In which of the following short stories would an unreliable narrator be most appropriate?
a story about superheroes told from a superhero’s point of view
an ironic story about dogs told from the point of view of a dog who thinks he is a cat
a story in which a hermetic man saves an orphan child from a gang of circus managers
none of the above
A good reason to use a flashback is:
to add history to a story
to give characters motivation for unusual actions
to make readers work harder
to add interest to a story
Which fictional element is used to provide information to the reader in this excerpt from The Mountain To Mohammed: “Tom had looked forward to the trip to Jones Beach more than anyone — he wanted to see the ocean, to swim in it, to build castles in the sand.”?
allegory
exposition
scene
flashback
Allegory is most often associated with which fiction form?
mystery novel
fable
traditional short story
monologue
Which well-known novel includes allegory as a significant part of its characterization and plot?
Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory
Hatchet
The Giver
Coraline
In E.C. Meyers’ The Mountain To Mohammed, to which religious text does the title make an allusion?
The Koran
The Bible
The Bhagavad Gita
none of the above
In E.C. Meyers’ The Mountain To Mohammed, what does the beach symbolize?
joy and excitement
terminal illness
death and sadness
life and health
What is one difference between flash fiction and a short story?
flash fiction is longer than a short story
flash fiction is humorous, whereas short stories are serious
flash fiction is shorter than a short story
flash fiction does not make use of expositions, whereas a short story does
In a story, a situation in which a character represents greed would be:
an allegory
a symbol
a scene
exposition
In a piece of fiction, the excerpt “That boy is such a Romeo” is an example of:
symbolism
an allusion
allegory
a scene
Something that should happen in every scene is:
action
change
neither of the above
both of the above
A part of a story that takes place in a limited time and place is:
a sentence
a paragraph
dialogue
a scene
How is a Shakespearean sonnet divided?
an octave and a sestet
couplets
three quatrains and a couplet
unlimited stanzas
The volta in a sonnet is:
the rhyme scheme
the name of the stanzas
a change or turn in the poem
the theme
The pantoum uses what technique?
a strict rhyme scheme
a consistent meter
repetition of lines
specific number of stanzas
A sonnet has how many lines?
twelve
fourteen
it doesn’t matter
ten
Gwendolyn Bennett both personified and created a metaphor for what in Sonnet 1?
spring
rain
birth
death
The poem One two/Buckle my shoe/Three four/Close the door uses which rhyme scheme?
abab
abce
aabb
baba
The line Time is but a stream I go fishing in contains an example of:
metaphor
assonance
hyperbole
imagery
My love is like a red, red rose is an example of:
personification
onomatopoeia
simile
metaphor
The line Your eyes hold the promise of a new day contains an example of:
simile
oxymorons
personification
metaphor
Frequently the woods are pink –/Frequently are brown./Frequently the hills undress/Behind my native town.
uses which rhyme scheme?
abba
abcb
abcd
abab
In regard to irony in Williams’ poem The Red Wheelbarrow, which of the following is true?
the irony is situational
the irony is actually litotes
there is no apparent irony in the poem
the irony is emotional irony
Irony in Dorothy Parker’s One Perfect Rose is created through the use of:
hyperbole
symbolism
understatement
allegory
William Carlos Williams’ poem The Red Wheelbarrow:
includes a symbol in every line
is focused more on imagery than symbolism
is written for farmers
is not about a wheelbarrow at all
In Frost’s poem Acquainted With The Night, what might night symbolize?
apathy
anger
loneliness
disgust
The song lyrics of Wrapped Around Your Finger includes allusions to:
battles fought in Vietnam
Greek mythology and literary characters
modern politicians
love poems
In writing poems, allusions can be used to:
make the poem more like a puzzle
get readers to use the dictionary
create an emotional response in readers
shouldn’t be used
A benefit of using allegories in your poetry writing can be:
they are easy to write
they are easy to understand
readers connect because of the shared experiences
there are no benefits
When poets choose to use allusions, they should:
be aware of who their readers are
try to avoid them
use mythological and religious characters
use only modern references
Allegory in contemporary poetry:
is dead because Billy Collins said so
is useless because it is antiquated
can be used with success
is the same as allusion
Litotes are a form of:
symbolism
hyperbole
understatement
allusion
First Assignment
Question Description
RESIDENCY 2 First ASSIGNMENT: Aligning Research Components Matrix: This is a working document for you to start and revise during the residency sessions as you work towards alignment.We don’t expect you to know now what will be your dissertation focus.Start with something close to your interests. Align the components as you develop your thinking. We expect your final dissertation will be different after many more iterations. The boxes will expand as you type. (See Guidelines and Rubric below).
Name: Residency Cohort:Cohort Leader: |
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College/School: |
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Specialization: |
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Working Title for your Dissertation (12 words or less): |
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Problem Statement |
Aligned Research Design |
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Dissertation Prospectus Rubric Quality Indicators |
Meaningful, Justified, and Impact (related to specialization} |
Original |
Grounded |
Feasible and Objective |
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Research Components to Align |
Social Problem of Significance in the Field What is the social problem? Why is it important to address? What stakeholders would care? You can use citations. |
Background/Literature Review List key words and search terms to explore. Add at least 3 empirical references below. |
Research Problem / Meaningful Gap in Literature What researchable problem relates to the broader social problem in column 1? What might not have been researched about it? (Gap) |
Possible Research Question(s) |
Theories or Conceptual Framework Add at least one citation here and reference at end. |
Tentative Method of Inquiry |
Fill in each section as you develop ideas. |
Seminar 1 |
Seminar 2 and 3 |
Seminar 1 and 4 |
Seminar 4 |
Seminar 5 |
Seminar 5 |
Initial idea(s) during seminars 1-5 |
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Peer and Faculty feedback and networking:Gather feedback on your idea from at least one faculty and one peer at residency. For example:Peer in my program suggested x, y, z.The faculty who I met with at advising recommended a, b, c. Due to faculty feedback regarding my methodology I changed it to a quantitative design so it is more aligned to my problem and research question. |
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Final Response:Enter your “final response” in each column based on the feedback you received. If the information did not change enter it here as well so the alignment is clear—do not leave any item blank and do not list “none”. |
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Reflection & Next Steps: Reflect on your next steps for each component (column) based on the feedback and what you have learned during Residency 2. What do you need to do to prepare for Residency 3 (e.g. Read, annotate, network, build skills, use resources, etc.} |
How you might network to find available data sources or feasible data collection sites? |
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REFERENCES: (APA Format) At least three empirical articles and one theory book or article. |
GUIDELINES FOR RESIDENCY 2 FINAL ASSIGNMENT: You will develop the Final Assignment during each of the Residency 2 sessions.Residency 2 sessions were designed to help you learn how to develop and align research components.
The columns in the Final Assignment are the components needed in a research study. These components correspond to the topics in the Residency 2 seminars:
- Social Problem or Significance in the Field – Seminar 1
- Background / Literature Review – Seminars 2 and 3
- Research Problem / Meaningful Gap in the Literature – Seminars 1 and 4
- Possible Research Question – Seminar 5
- Theories or Conceptual Framework – Seminar 5
- Tentative Method of Inquiry – Seminar 5
The rows in the Final Assignment represent the iterative process of developing your research ideas. To complete the Final Assignment, there are four actions:
- 1st row: Write your initial ideas/thoughts for each item.
- 2nd row: Gather feedback from others on those items.
- 3rd row: Finalize your thoughts about each item.
- 4th row: Reflect on what you need to do to move forward.
RESIDENCY 2 FINAL ASSIGNMENT – GRADING RUBRIC
Residency 2 Final Assignment Criteria |
0—Element Missing |
1 to 2—Below Expectations |
3—Meets minimal expectations |
4 to 5–Exceeds Expectations |
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One or more item is completely not present; an answer of “none” is given for one or more items. |
Minimal information presented in the items so that the reader cannot determined what is being proposed, or the answers are not related to the item (“none” is not an acceptable answer for any element) |
Adequate information presented in all or most of the items so that the reader can determine what is being proposed but some areas may not be clear (“none” is not an acceptable answer for any element) |
Clear description ofinformation presented in each of the items (“none” is not an acceptable answer for any element) |
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One or more item is completely not present; an answer of “none” is given for one or more items. |
Minimal information presented in the items so that the reader cannot determine what the feedback was and/or feedback from at least one peer and at least one faculty not provided, or the answers are not related to the item (“none” is not an acceptable answer for any element) |
Adequate description of the feedback from at least one peer and at least one faculty provided and an indication of how that feedback may be used in included (“none” is not an acceptable answer for any element) |
Clear description of the feedback from at least one peer and at least one faculty provided and a clear description of how/if that feedback will be used and why (“none” is not an acceptable answer for any element) |
(3) Final Response |
One or more item is completely not present; an answer of “none” is given for one or more items. |
Minimal information presented in the items so that the reader cannot determine what is being proposed, or the answers are not related to the item |
Adequate information presented in all or most of the items so that the reader can determine what is being proposed but some areas may not be clear |
Clear description of information presented in each of the items |
(4) Reflection & Next Steps |
One or more item is completely not present; an answer of “none” is given for one or more items. |
Minimal information presented in the items so that the reader cannot determined what the student learned from the experience and/or next steps are not clear, or the answers are not related to the item. |
A reflection on each of the sessions/areas is provided as well as next steps planned in each session/area. |
Clear description of the reflection on each of the sessions/areas is provided as well as defined next steps planned in each session/area. |
(5) Writing |
Reader is not able to make sense of the materials provided. |
Inconsistent use of standard English obstructs presentation’s clarity and the reader’s understanding of ideas and/or inconsistent use of grammar and mechanics are evident throughout presentation. |
Consistent use of standard English and/or few inaccuracies in grammar and mechanics. |
Use of standard English, grammar, and mechanics are at a scholarly level. |
(6) APA |
APA formatting not used in citations/ references. |
Weak/Inconsistent use of APA formatting in citations/references. |
Consistent use of APA formatting in citations/references |
Use of APA formatting and citations indicate mastery. |
Grading: (“none” is not an acceptable answer for any element)
Satisfactory (S)= All items at a score of 3 or above (Meets minimal expectations)
Unsatisfactory (U)= One or more items at a score of 2 or lower (Does not meet minimal expectations).
Week 7 forum post responses
Question Description
In need of a 250 word response/discussion to each of the following forum posts. Agreement/disagreement/and/or continuing the discussion.
Original forum discussion/topic post is as follows:
We are in Week 7 of course and it’s check-in time. Our discussion this week is about your progress on the Integrative Project Literature Review Just two questions to address because I know you are busy working diligently on it. 😉
Where are you at in your review development process?
What are you focusing attention on as we near the impending deadline for completion?
Forum post response #1
forum post response #2
Where are you at in your review development process?
At this point, my review is fully developed and only requires revision. I submitted my rough draft Friday afternoon and received it back from Dr. Curtin yesterday.
What are you focusing attention on as we near the impending deadline for completion?
My attention is currently focused on applying the recommended edits to my paper. While overall, I am very happy with where I am at in this project, the editing may be more complex than I realized yesterday. I am happy with my rough draft grade and thrilled with Dr. Curtin’s feedback. I once again feel *passing with distinction* is possible, provided I don’t screw up the editing. When I read through the edits, the recommendations were clear. I was surprised by how much anthromorphizing I did. I understand the feedback and clearly see the problem when I look at it, however, I am just shocked by how much I did it.
When I reviewed the feedback yesterday, I thought I would sit down today and complete the revision in two to three hours and send the final copy off on it’s way. However, I sat down this morning to begin the edits and feel it may take longer than that. After correcting the anthromorphization in my introduction, my introduction is now two lines too long, carrying over to a third page. So, once again I’m staring at this introduction wondering what I can chop, just as I was last week. I hope that applying edits to other parts of the paper do not create this same conundrum. I am still confident I will have it submitted early.
Speaking of page limits, Dr. Curtin’s edits pushed my 35 pages over to 36 pages. Fortunately, many edits are marking through redundant phrases or sentences that will be deleted. Additionally, many of the edits themselves add to the body of the paper. I hope that the introduction page count dilemma that inspired me to stop and write this post (I previously wondered what the heck I would write about here this week) do not occur within other critical pages as well.
One thing I knew I was going to have to revise are my course content summaries. I cited many if not all my studies with the authors name at the beginning of the sentence and not at the end. I need to rewrite those sentences in the format asked by the template. I had even graded myself off for this in the rubric, so I knew that was coming. Yesterday I expected this would be the most timing consuming part of my revision process, but again, I’m stymied by what to cut out of my introduction. I think I’m going to move forward and work on editing the rest of the paper first, then come back to decide how to shorten it back to two pages.
Forum post response #3
Where are you at in your review development process?
I was able to submit my rough draft on Friday morning, and Dr. Curtin was amazing to be able to review and send my rough draft to me on Saturday with the edits I needed to make. I then was able to work on edits over the weekend. Luckily, I do not have to be at work until 1130 AM so I had plenty of time to work on my edits this morning and submit my final draft before leaving for work. I hope I made all the required edits correctly. Dr. Curtin is awesome in showing us exactly what we need to correct. I had still had several anthropomorphisms in my rough draft to correct, as well as my references. I used the citations from the APU library, and you would think that they would be correct, but no I had to correct almost everyone of my references. One thing I have learned from this course, is to pay close attention to all of the helpful hints Dr. Curtin provided for us on this journey such as not relying on citation generators.
What are you focusing attention on as we near the impending deadline for completion?
I guess my focus for today is to take a deep breath and relax as the heavy lifting of this course is complete. I have submitted my final draft, and I am now waiting to see if any more edits are needed. Looking at the final draft as I prepared to submit it this morning, gave me a sense of completion and triumph. I think if any editing is required, it should be minimal as Dr. Curtin gave detailed instruction on the editing process. I hope my fellow classmates take time to look at how far we have come and what we have accomplished in a relatively short amount of time. I have put so much time into this course, that I may not know what to do once this course is completed, LOL. I want to send out a special thanks to all my classmates for giving me suggestions along the way and especially Dr. Curtin for all your help on this major task.
I wish you all the best as you complete your projects this week and hope you all have a wonderful week!
unit 4 assessment
Question Description
25 points