Project 1: Revising Your Information

Directions:

Step 1: Revisit your Information or what you used as information in the paragraph you chose for the prevision assignment. First, copy the information from your essay word for word.

Step 2: Then, review the directions on information from the following lectures: Review PowerPoints: Essay Format & Tips on Writing and Preparing for Project 1: Practicing PIE.

• Remember, information is used to support the topic (topic sentence) and to make the topic sentence credible and verifiable.

Step 3: After reviewing the information on how to write a strong point, rewrite your information. You may need to introduce the quote better, choose a different quote that supports the point better or whatever else you think will improve the information.