Eng106 Modify the paper

This paper needs to be revised

1. I will send you relevant books for your reference, because I have written 6 pages, but this assignment requires 2 pages, so you need to reduce some unnecessary words.

2. I will send you a document named MINI LENS, which contains some writing requirements. I need you to help me check if there are any problems in my paper.

3. I will send you some photos. This is what the professor modified for me.