University Of Wisconsin Milwaukee The Impact of Technological Advancements on Warfare Strategies during World War I essay

Some feedback to consider: 

1. think some beneficial tips for you would be to explain some previous technology from WW1 and also maybe start off with a brief explanation of your research question.

2.I think it might be worth providing some examples of how the dynamics of civilian life changed beyond “a bunch of people died”. Something to give more mmph to the call to action against these technological advancements.